I have fancy for an imaginary girl whom I have never met but I often see her in my dreams and thoughts. It has been long since I am witnessing her.
I have scribbled some verses for her , I won't call it a poem as I feel I don't have that great skill of complicated imagination like a poet....!!!! Also I don't know whether it really makes any sense (?), but I have just written it and tried to keep it in rhymes.....!!!
SHE.....!!!!!
sure, for it was a seraphic night
sure, for it was a seraphic night
when we met....
still feel overwhelmed
though never seen her yet....!!
many people have walked
in and out of my heart....
she is some one...
who left foot print without effort.....!!!
some time I slumber
with prejudices in my mind.....
she always condescends
she is so kind......!!!
no talk some days,
some times, makes me frantic...
some times, makes me frantic...
I myself feel wonder...
why i show antic(s)...??
day by day
she has become my jo...!!!
some day ll witness us..
waiting for that mo..!!
the affection, the love
that she always show...
I appreciate ,I admire..
I shall ever owe...
You ll always be there..
I believe that's true....
and I'll always be there...
always for you....!!!!!!!!
( summer , 2005)
11 comments:
wah!!!....
kitna pyara khyaal hai...
kabhi uski tabeer ho to hume bhi milwana....
you can call it a poem!!!....:)
tabeer ho to pahle ...!!!
are bhaiya ye bahot sahi tha
hey its gr8....too gud...keep on writing like this....for ur imaginary gal
@ nishu , neha
thanx...!!!
quite impressive... and i must say you have taken good advantage of poetic license...
thnx dada...!!!!
I like your attitude and your ideas. Keep up the good work!
I like your attitude and your ideas. Keep up the good work!!!!
really tooo gud ..aap ka har kayaal sundar hai..har koi apne khayalon main apne pyar ki tasveer banata hai..lekin aise kavita likh kar bayan karna bhi har koi nahi jaanta...jaise aap ne likhya hai..... mashallah!!!!!
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