Sunday, February 24, 2008

SHE...!!!!!

I have never been good in writing , whether it is a poem , prose or an essay...!! but ya, for quite some time I have tried to articulate my feelings.
I have fancy for an imaginary girl whom I have never met but I often see her in my dreams and thoughts. It has been long since I am witnessing her.
I have scribbled some verses for her , I won't call it a poem as I feel I don't have that great skill of complicated imagination like a poet....!!!! Also I don't know whether it really makes any sense (?), but I have just written it and tried to keep it in rhymes.....!!!



SHE.....!!!!!


sure, for it was a seraphic night
when we met....
still feel overwhelmed
though never seen her yet....!!


many people have walked
in and out of my heart....
she is some one...
who left foot print without effort.....!!!

some time I slumber
with prejudices in my mind.....
she always condescends
she is so kind......!!!

no talk some days,
some times, makes me frantic...
I myself feel wonder...
why i show antic(s)...??


day by day
she has become my jo...!!!
some day ll witness us..
waiting for that mo..!!


the affection, the love
that she always show...
I appreciate ,I admire..
I shall ever owe...

You ll always be there..
I believe that's true....
and I'll always be there...
always for you....!!!!!!!!

( summer , 2005)

11 comments:

Noopur said...

wah!!!....
kitna pyara khyaal hai...
kabhi uski tabeer ho to hume bhi milwana....

Noopur said...

you can call it a poem!!!....:)

Meander.....!!!! said...

tabeer ho to pahle ...!!!

Nishu said...

are bhaiya ye bahot sahi tha

neha said...

hey its gr8....too gud...keep on writing like this....for ur imaginary gal

Meander.....!!!! said...

@ nishu , neha

thanx...!!!

Freaky Window said...

quite impressive... and i must say you have taken good advantage of poetic license...

Meander.....!!!! said...

thnx dada...!!!!

manoj kumar said...

I like your attitude and your ideas. Keep up the good work!

manoj kumar said...

I like your attitude and your ideas. Keep up the good work!!!!

Ravander said...

really tooo gud ..aap ka har kayaal sundar hai..har koi apne khayalon main apne pyar ki tasveer banata hai..lekin aise kavita likh kar bayan karna bhi har koi nahi jaanta...jaise aap ne likhya hai..... mashallah!!!!!